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Thank you @Schrödinger, I searched hours for a picture like this:

Clearly an evolutionary predecessor for the Keepers? Or a human-Keeper hybrid? Why is he wearing a crown, though

Thank you @Schrödinger, I searched hours for a picture like this:

Those teeth: An evolutionary predecessor for the Keepers? Or a human-Keeper hybrid? Why is he wearing a crown, though.

2 hours ago, Lenne said:

Dunno if that were to be allowed, since Rad, would have to deal with Activision/Treyarch then. . . 

Great job you are doing, Rad I am looking forward to reading the book in full. : -D

It would be a shame if they didn't saw the potential in this. After all, it doesn't harm them, right? 

You should definately make contact with them first, though

If you've finished this book, you should seriously contact a book presser. This doesn't undergo any other professional work

That part those zombies came marching on the podium was really unnerving, I could really vizualize that. Curious to what your further involvement of Die Spinne will be, as this is an area officially never touched by Treyarch.

It's admirable how you make every chapter of this story that I thought to know so well so unpredictable! Also, gotta taste a Blowtorch soon!

On 3/10/2020 at 5:19 PM, ot7games said:

or it may be the weasel cause he dies during mob of the dead on the roof cause "Finn" O'Leary, "Sal" DeLuca, and Billy Handsome shot him or killed him on the roof and let him bleed to death

In this thread this is also discussed and I personally think the face looks like Viktor Reznov's. The map Mob of the Dead seems to have more ties with the Russian, but furthermore I am not entirely sure how he ended up in Alcatraz. It would be more likely if it was the Weasel, being there from a prior Cycle where he died, his soul still being in the distance. The jumpscare can be seen in the direction of the Golden Gate bridge, right? That is indeed the location where the Weasel would have died

6 hours ago, RadZakpak said:

Chapter 29: Burn 'Em Out

 

 

For that music clip I was waiting for the Inglorious Bastards reference, so I was glad to see 'Gratzi' :). I really didn't know what to expect from a chapter of Peter in Paris, as we have zero in-game clues about that, but the more inpredictability it gives, so I like it alot!

Someone who has a good strategy for this map? I feel like all parts are too narrow to run trains

Reminds me a bit of the movie 'the Last Samurai', where the Emperor agrees in changing Japan to Western standards in order to "modernize" the nation, abandoning the old culture and traditions. Damn I got shivers down my spine when reading that reference to Unit 731's frostbite experiments, and it was cool to see the Raygun being used not as a fun weapon to zombies but for what gruesome function it actually original had: killing men. Horrific.

By the way, what happened with chapter 12 - 17, including my favourite chapter '....I will build my Church". Seems like they are still in the doc but not in the chapter lis

8 minutes ago, Douglas Wickline said:

heheh, thanks. I think I'll try to get to round 100 over the weekend. and who knows? if I'm REALLY lucky I might be able to last all the way to round 200... now that is just a silly thought...

I'm not entirely sure who holds the record of CotD on this site, but I imagine round 100 comes pretty close. Good luck, and may the Box be in your favour!

Thinking about it, some kind of tournament might be a neat idea (in the way of who reaches the highest round). You got any idea what your records are in other maps?

3 minutes ago, Douglas Wickline said:

just the sprinting fools... heheh

Ahahah love how you call 'em

2 minutes ago, Douglas Wickline said:

why yes I do. that area outside of the lighthouse where you can buy the AK74u that space is pretty good for running circles around zombies and if things get a little hairy, lead the crawlers and any headless zombies into the cold water nearby... don't forget to grab Stamin-up first... and maybe Deadshot... but I only grab Deadshot because I like the jingle...

Ah, gotta be wary of those crawlers getting your anckles but furthermore that sounds like a good strategy

Do you have a specific area in the map where you do this, or are you running all around? 

Must be the best glitch ever, though

Two beautiful chapters. Spoilers alert for those who haven't read it yet, but I feel like this is the absolute end of Richtofen's sanity. After the incident with the Electric Trap that initially seemed to have pushed the Apothicans away, Richtofen finally finding himself to think clear again, but they appeared to be back, constinuing driving him crazy. The stress, the paranoia for spies. And now this: his first direct murder, not on a regular testsubject but on someone he finally started to trust, to befriend. 

The moments of Richtofen's insanity approaches: the moments he uses Samantha and Ultimis for cruel experiments. The moment his lust for blood, his joy in death, his character we encounter in the games, come closer. While his mental breakdown, his downfall, has been going on for some years now I knew there must have been one moment, one action or event, that would drive him mad. The flipping point, if you will. I feel like we've reached that point now

So who's your favourite singer: Dempsey, Takeo, Richtofen or Nikolai?

10 hours ago, RadZakpak said:

These songs always bring back the holiday spirit. I urge anyone who has not listened to give them a try.

Getting into the mood I see :)

EDIT: Those are amazing. Love how Takeo asks for honour or order the many times on the background

"Beware of the beast man.

For he is the devils pawn.

Alone among gods primates.

He kills for sport,or lust,or greed.

Yay he will murder his brother to posses his brothers land.

Let him not breed in great numbers,

For he will make a desert of his home,and yours.

Shun him, drive him back into his jungle layer.

For he is the harbinger of death."

Damnit, the Shadowman was already there around the time of GkNova-6!

I wonder how the HAARP and DUGA towers correlate with the ones we have to activate for MPD Richthofen to get full control...

I like it how Pernell's character is so much different than the sort-of prototype of this chapter (the one that is deleted now). While for sure, this version is closer to how Pernell's character appears to be according to the Alpha Omega radios, I actually liked your own, initial, clumsy version of him.

Anyway, good chapter! Like the McCain-Dempsey-Gale thing

Never knew this either, definately gonna try it!

Great thread, brains! I heavily recommend this to anyone interested in the Apothicans. I find it interesting that the Mi Go originate from Fungus, as we see that growing in all dark, humid corners of Morg City.

Furthermore, I found this in Wikipedia: "The Mi-Go can transport humans from Earth to Pluto (and beyond) and back again by removing the subject's living brain and placing it into a "brain cylinder", which can be attached to external devices to allow it to see, hear, and speak."

2 hours ago, RadZakpak said:

Suspense is what I was going for by playing with expectations.

The difference about the original fate of Sophia and the fate in the Agonia fracture is interesting. You really play with the suspence for the readers, and it shows how close she was to death. Also quite ironic how she leaves Group 935, in oposition to how she stayed and kept loving Maxis when she was a robot, in an alternative reality

Too bad this story wont be realized anymore...it even somehow made the creation/dissolation of fractures seem epic, as Peter sorta fell right into it and then spitted out of it. But yeah, upon reading the radios about Peter and Pernell, one of my first thoughts went to the storybook. Peter saying all those 'yes sir's', like a real obeying soldier, and Pernell being power hungry instead of a clumsy helper of Peter and new member of the CIA... Thanks for sharing anyway, and the idea for a seperate 'side'-story of a person sometimes popping up in several books is good.

1 hour ago, RadZakpak said:

Glad you enjoyed! Yes, those 46 chapters + prologue and epilogue are my plans for Book 1 as a whole. But I do have another chapter planned that I want to put in somewhere, and when I get around to a planned chapter if I don’t feel like it will make a good chapter I may scrap some.

Ah, I see. You know, I only see 27 chapters on my mobile device, so I was wondering already how you could put so much intel in only 4 chapters more. But 46 must be enough haha

Epic one, this one's so much different than any chapter before. I guess Alone is a real fitting name, as we follow the little-speaking, suffering Nikolai here, without any real conversation. It sketches a realistic idea about the war: grey, cold, pain, loneliness. Oh and by the way, the part with those two boys, I just knew he would shoot them. It is awful, and I dont want him to but it fits well in the change Nikolai has made (also got that carpenter reference in the beginning :)). Its all bitterness now.

Another question: Are the seeable chapters on the teleportation menu the only Book1 chapters coming, or will there come more?