The world we lived in is dead

[Blamco177]

The sounds around the class have all stopped, everyone is listening closely to the sounds of screams and groans that come from the speakers, no one understands what is going on.

The teachers chalk drops...

*crack*

"RUN FOR IT!!!"

(earlier...)

(Outside of the school gates)

"I told you I only tease to see that smile"

"But you know that-"

"uh huh, you know you like it Kim"

"SHUT UP JUAN!"

*RRRRRRIIIIINNNNGGGGG*

"I'll see you later Kim"

"Jerk..."

(on campus)

(from nearby) "Yo Juan whats wrong?"

(Juan turns around)

"Theres my ass of a friend"

"I gotta work harder then, hey did you hear the news? That shit's been keeping me awake"

"Luis? You sure I know you? watching the news?"

"I'm serious, there's been something wrong lately people fighting for no reason, hospital filled all the time, dead bodies. I'm a little worried."

(Grabs Luis by the shoulder)

"Man look, this stuff happens. Just keep your head low and you'll be fine. I gotta go to class, Biology is a pain if i'm not there early"

(In class)

"Good morning class, know as all of you know there is a problem going on lately. This might lead to us not having class tommorow, so for today I will just-

(Speaker crackles)

"Students stay inside your classrooms. This is not a drill, there is a disturbance on campus that will be resolved shortly")

*Groans echo in the background*

"What the hell?!!? Stay back, get away from me! GET AWAY!!!"

*screams devoured in the announcers voice*

-NOTE-

This will be continued if I get any feed-back, any support and creative criticism is encouraged.

I hope this was worth your time, thank you for reading the short beginning.

[MyLittleHellhound]

that was amazing man keep doing it!! definitlyna good sweet intro, nice characters..um yes keep going please! :D

[zXRenegadeXz]

could be better.

How bout character intro's for a start

[KrazyCookies]

Sounds very interesting... I would like to read more.

Also I'm not sure if this was a mistake or not but when Juan said "Keep your head low" did you mean High? :?

[MyLittleHellhound]

Sounds very interesting... I would like to read more.

Also I'm not sure if this was a mistake or not but when Juan said "Keep your head low" did you mean High? :?

i thnk he meant like keep your head down or stay unnoticed

[ZombieOfTheDead]

Looks like it could be interesting, none the less, but you should really make it read like a regular book. Seems too script like. if not, put the characters names in front of the sentence so its easier to see who's talking.

BTW, nice reference Highschool of the Dead in 2 paragraphs, made me lol.