20 years...

[tri4]

i havent been on the forum lately so if i did anything wrong tell admin everyone else give constructive criticisim

Its been 20 years, 20 long years since the plague broke out of a military lab after a solar flare... central america and africa were the first to go...

the plague then hit a wall of defense while going into europe, but it only took a matter of weeks to break through the line of defense. it spread through the rest of the world like a wild fire after that. it hit hard. all infected became the creatures.... no, zombies... within 24 hours they turned. it took only 5 minutes to spread to a different limb, which means the infected limb must be amputated within five minutes, after that, the only cure is death.... most were unprepared. my family was one of the only ones prepared... we owned a bunker 2 hours out of the city with enough food to feed 200 for 10 years. hundreds of thousands of rounds of ammo. we also owned a p.m.c (private military corporation) that consisted of about 3000 personnel. but the virus hit hard, wiping out the pmc in a matter of days. my family and about 100 of the pmc personnel made it into bunker, readying weapons, customizing hummers and helicopters for the battle yet to come, watching the tv and then listening to the radio when the tv went out.

and now its been twenty years, twenty long years, and now it's time for payback...

when i am done with this novel i will fix all grammar and make it into paragraphs.

fyi, brains are always accepted at the land of tri4

[MyLittleHellhound]

Good story thus far, waiting for the next chapter now. :)

[tri4]

hi my little hellhound you know, that north korea based story you wrote inspired me?

[darkflareon]

Its a really good start and great way of explaining the basis of what is haperning.

I do think however that there could have been a little more detail to entice the reader.

I shall be waiting for the next part.

-Flareon

[MyLittleHellhound]

hi my little hellhound you know, that north korea based story you wrote inspired me?

Woah really? That's really, really good to hear.

Keep on writing!

[perfectlemonade]

The last line was intriguing! I like this! Keep it up. :D