The Mangekyo (Non-Zombie Related)

[Roachleader]

I'm not sure if posting non-zombie related stories/poems is permitted, but i'll submit it anyways, just to see. i wrote this a while back about the Uchiha Clan from an anime called "Naruto" and i got a lot of positive feedback from posting it on my old site, so i'm posting it here too out of curiousity just to see what you guys think of it.

My family, once known for their visual might

Vanished into darkness, in a single fateful night

Friends betrayed for increasing power, with a will to fight

Little by little you will see, your eyes shall lose their light

Desperate actions and cold betrayal, a brother's eternal plight.

Another's life mercilessly snuffed, to pull back from the dark.

A cursed gift flows through our blood, igniting a vengeful spark.

[MyLittleHellhound]

Ib believe they are, I asked.

[darkflareon]

I think its really good . I'm not really great with poems but I do think that this one is really good . I would love to be able to give u more feedback but as i said not really great with how poems are ment to be written if it sounds good it is good to me .

-Flareon